Orlijah B-day fic!

[lijahlover]

Title:Burning Desire
Author:lijahlover
Orlijah
Challenge:Speed Challenge you have 5 minutes to write this.
Rating:PG
betaed by no one all mistakes are mine.

This is for arabia764 Happy Birthday hun XD


Orlando barely heard the beat of the music when he looked up, his eyes narrowed as they moved over this stunning man in front of him everything stopped as he felt his throat muscles constrict and his body throb with a burning desire as the pulsing beat washed over him. He finally remembers to breath before he passed out. He quickly finished his beer and stood up he had to make his move and ask him to dance. The thrill of excitement raced through him as he walks towards him, he runs his eyes over his tight, black, silk shirt and impossibly tight blue jeans. He licked his lips and approached the sexy, beautiful stranger he paused to draw in a breath and asked,"Let's dance."

Part Two

Comments

[aprilkat.livejournal.com]

I love the way the sentences reflect how Orli feels - the story could easily be called "Breathless"! Sexy!

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much and a good title too XD

[julchen11.livejournal.com]

Beautiful! What a lovely gift, babe!
I'm sure the birthday girl will love it. I do :-)

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much and she loved it *hugs*

[mews1945.livejournal.com]

I like the way the ficlet seems to move to the beat of the music.

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

Ohhh thanks those 5 minute challenges can be a lot of fun. :)