ext_23504 (
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2007-12-15 05:45 pm (UTC)
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Nice and romantic. I like the way you write these two.
Saw a little thing to fix. In the second to last paragraph, Viggo says I want you to spend the rest of my life with you Orli. You need to delte the "you"
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Saw a little thing to fix. In the second to last paragraph, Viggo says I want you to spend the rest of my life with you Orli. You need to delte the "you"